Wednesday, January 21, 2015
Fingerprints - Has CSI Been Compromised?
A bit more than a few years ago part of my job included crime scene investigation. Of course, that included taking, lifting, and analyzing fingerprints. The science became a great boon to solving crimes. It still is, but it appears fingerprints can be compromised. A claim has been made that it is possible to re-create a person's fingerprints from photographs. Useful information for those developing a plot. For the entire article see:
http://www.bbc.com/news/technology-30623611
Happy writing.
Thursday, January 15, 2015
Do Books Need Chapters
A recent question surfaced during a writer's chat – Are chapters necessary when writing a book. Short answer? NO. The novel is a free form of writing which means exactly that. The author is free to tell the story in any form they want. The caveat is – the reader.
I'll not go into the history of writing. I was not thrilled using leather or papyrus with their limiting space. However, the chapter developed in those days because of space.
There are several reason to break a novel into chapters. One reason most put forth is that they make navigation and place marking easy. My wife is an avid reader, and some books put her to sleep, which of course, generally drop to the floor. Knowing the chapter she has been reading facilitates quickly finding the lost place and resuming the read . . . until falling asleep again.
Chapters are useful in dividing the action or subject matter. In effect, they become similar to movie scenes. For instance, let's imagine a story with Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson. We introduce the crime, bring on Holmes & Watson, Holmes investigates the scene, potential suspects are introduced, Watson goes to his laboratory to analyze whatever, the suspects are brought together, and the perpetrator is uncovered. Placing each of these in separate sections or chapters helps the reader navigate through the story.
In a story under construction, changing viewpoint is very effective in describing events leading up to and during a battle. A lot goes on, each element of the action is important to each of the others, like a basket of writhing snakes. Some elements take longer to develop and describe so they become chapters. Other elements are like vignettes, but the reader needs to be alerted to a sudden change in the narrative, thus the use of * * *, ~ ~ ~, - - -, extra spaces, whatever, between paragraphs.
In another novel, the protagonist is introduced, his problem, the reason for running away from home. Some other important characters are introduced/mentioned, and his running away from home. Next chapter – his wanderings in a world away from home, other important characters are introduced, and the discovery of his real problem that puts him at odds with an unknown antagonist. Chapter three – developing skills for survival against the antagonist. It goes up and down hill from there.
In each chapter, there is an obvious change in the action and subject matter. They cover a particular period of time. It is possible to jump ahead or back, depending on the voice chosen for the tale, or switch to the actions of characters away from what is happening to the protagonist.
The key is that the reader should be alerted to these shifts. Yes, readers are generally intelligent enough to figure it out, but they have been conditioned by books, plays, screen, and TV stories to expect chapters and scenes to help them remain organized. Even in longer short stories, it is advisable to denote a break in viewpoint by using a physical notice as mentioned earlier. The reader is then comforted knowing that, “Hey! We're leaving here and going over there.”
A final note. A chapter does not necessarily have a beginning, middle, and end as the completed book does. Also, it can be short (I've seen as little as one paragraph). Interestingly, I have written many short stories where the requirement is about 3,000 to 3,500 words. When doing a novel chapter, guess the length I have unconsciously written? That's not to say there the reader won't find shorter or longer chapters. Word count is only the by-product of what is needed to tell that particular part of the story.
Thursday, January 1, 2015
Failing Science Fiction
From Discover Magazine:
When the Science Fiction genre came into its own, authors explained how and why things worked, and for this reason I find less enjoyment with many modern stories that are label SF, yet lack this element. Without such explanations does the writing move from SciFi to Fantasy? Are writers' grasp of scientific principles too shallow to meet this requirement? Is that a fair assessment?
So, what exactly is Science Fiction? Turning to Wikipedia, there are a couple attempts to define this somewhat elusive genre. “According to science fiction writer Robert A. Heinlein, "a handy short definition of almost all science fiction might read: realistic speculation about possible future events, based solidly on adequate knowledge of the real world, past and present, and on a thorough understanding of the nature and significance of the scientific method." [Heinlein, Robert A.; Cyril Kornbluth; Alfred Bester; Robert Bloch (1959). "The Science Fiction Novel: Imagination and Social Criticism". University of Chicago: Advent Publishers.] One of my early mentors, Rod Serling's definition was "fantasy is the impossible made probable. Science fiction is the improbable made possible." [Rod Serling (1962-03-09). The Twilight Zone, "The Fugitive".]”
I use the term, “elusive genre” because it can be divided into hard and soft categories with a slew of sub-genres. I all too frequently see fantasy stories labelled as SF thus confusing the two. It is important to label one's story correctly if for no other reason than marketing to the right group. Therefore, it behoves a writer to look up each of those genre and understand what they are, and what they aren't.
SF - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Science_fiction
Fantasy - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fantasy
In fact, whatever genre a person writes in, or thinks they are writing in, the writer should become familiar with the definition and parameters. It only takes a few strokes of the keyboard.
If you are interested in writing SF, looking for story prompts, or simply interested in what's happening around you, here's a link to obtain Discovery Magazine in your eMail free: http://discovermagazine.com/magazine/newsletter.
Friday, December 19, 2014
Info for you Detective Writers
NOTE: I have an interest in science (why else would I have earned a B.S. in Natural Science?), therefore follow various journals. They are a great help as story prompts, and adding technical detail to stories. Whenever I run across something interesting, I'll kick it out this door.
--Sean
The following article appeared in the recent DiscoveryMagazine.
--Sean
The following article appeared in the recent DiscoveryMagazine.
Microbes
on Pubic Hair Could Help Solve
Sexual Crimes
Sexual Crimes
Forensic specialists may have a new
tool to catch perpetrators of sexual assault – and it is
courtesy of the microbiome.
The microbiome, the community of
bacteria and viruses that live on and inside the human body, has
been a fruitful area of recent research. For instance, studies have
linked our helpful army of microbes with our likelihood of obesity
and our ability to metabolize
certain sugars. The recent Human
Microbiome Project categorized thousands of different strains of
bacteria that live on us. And now, researchers believe, the microbes
on pubic hair could help solve sexual crimes.
A Hair of Evidence
Forensic investigators glean DNA from
hair all the time, but this method isn’t without its flaws. To get
the best DNA evidence, investigators are looking for hairs that were
actively growing and still have the root attached. Unfortunately,
that doesn’t happen often. Most hairs on a crime scene are dead
and shed naturally, which leaves the DNA in those hairs degraded and
thus complicates investigations.
But the story doesn’t have to end
there for hair. A research team led by Silvana Tridico from Murdoch
University in Australia decided to investigate if the microbes on a
strand of hair could be personally identifiable.
Bacterial Transfer
Seven volunteers (three males and four
females) trimmed their scalp and pubic hair at three different
points in time and submitted samples for analysis. Researchers
processed the samples to identify the microbes by their DNA. Scalp
hair had roughly 50 microbial strains while male and female pubic
hair harbored over 70 distinct microbe types. Each
subject’s microbial community was so personalized that
researchers could identify individuals.
The microbial communities on pubic hair
generally remained individually distinct and consistent over the
course of the study. But one instance was telling: a romantic
couple’s bacteria, on the final collection, looked much more
similar than it had on the first two collections. The reason? They
had had sex the day before. This surprising result indicated that
humans swap external microbes during intercourse, suggesting that
the microbiome could be useful in forensic analysis on sexual
assault cases.
Researchers published their findings
Monday in the journal Investigative
Genetics.
Positive, But Preliminary
It’s unclear what role hair microbial
signatures will play in the future of fighting crime. These findings
were preliminary, and the sample size was incredibly small. Future
investigations will need to seriously examine the efficacy of
tracking microbial migrations during sex.
However, it’s a promising idea.
Someday, in addition to DNA, microbes may help bring about justice.
Photo
credit: Pimnana_01/Shutterstock
Tuesday, December 16, 2014
Give Yourself a Great Present
There are a number
of things a serious writer does.
1. Write every day.
2. Read other
writers' works.
3. Learn something
new about the art of writing.
4. Do their best at
work so they can afford to write.
5. Pray.
Regarding the writing every day thing, hopefully it is on a new work or editing a piece you want to publish. There are other things. Posting on Facebook, Twitter, Linkedin or other social sites does not count unless you are using complete and grammatically proper sentences, otherwise they are a procrastinator's dream. Journal entries or a letter to Santa Claus do. So does a year-end review. This can be one of your greatest tools for moving from a good writer to a great writer. Yes, this is about resolutions.
I had the privilege
of growing up in a community heavily influenced by Jews.
While I was brought up in the Christian faith, it was difficult avoid
not being influenced by my friends. I celebrated Jewish holidays with
them and Christian holidays with family – the best of two worlds
and made out like a bandit. However, in later years I came to
appreciate the month leading up to Rosh Hashanah, the beginning of
the Jewish new year. During 2014 it fell on Sept. 24.
During this time, a
person reviews the year past in some detail before making a plan for
the next year. Such introspection is far more beneficial than the
typical New Year's resolution thing that usually ends in failure,
laughed off, and forgotten.
What sort of things
did I focus on before writing down goals for 2015? (Yes, written
down).
1. Review what I
had planned to accomplish in 2014. (This included personal as well as
professional goals.)
2. For each one,
how did I do? Fell on my face? So-so? Pretty well? Right on!?
3. For each goal
that was less than stellar, is it worth trying again? What can I do
to do better?
4. What do I want
to accomplish in 2015? (Let me share some professional goals.)
a.
Complete the edit of A Pirate's Legacy VI by April 1.
b. Submit
“a” to publication
c.
Complete research for new novel, Herakleides: Prelude to War
(done)
d. Draft
“c” during National Writing Month in November (done)
e. Edit
Herakleides during Dec and Jan and have ready for publication
by Jul
f. Write
synopsis and begin research on Just Me in
Feb and have everything ready to write draft in Nov 2015 for the
National Writing challenge.
g.
Write bi-monthly eFile Anatomy of a Story
h. Submit one book review per month
i. Learn and apply a new or forgotten aspect of the
writing art
As
you can see, a pretty ambitious and busy schedule, but it's not just
a list of want-to-do. Having spent a month thinking about each goal,
I have a plan on how to achieve them (with alternatives because
neither the world or me are perfect). The over all list is posted
prominently where I work. Personal goals are posted on a mirror.
That's because I have to look at myself and discuss with that
reflection how those things will be accomplished today or explain why
I didn't do so well yesterday.
Serious
business? yes, but how else does a person improve on what they did
yesterday? How do we become a better person and a better, productive
writer?
Have
a great and productive year ahead.
Sean
Extra - An Interesting Writing Prompt
I
enjoy learning, mostly about history and science and after retiring,
returned to school to add a B.S. in Natural Science to a list of
other degrees and certificates. However, learning does not stop at
the ivy arch so the Internet just keeps me stoked because of articles
like this which appeared in the recent Discovery magazine's eFile.
(http://blogs.discovermagazine.com/loom/2011/06/21/a-beautiful-web-of-poison-extends-a-new-strand/#.VJBrr133yPR)
During
the first part of November a wanna-be writer said he wasn't
participating in the annual National Writing challenge because he
couldn't think of anything to write about. One look at this story and
how many different stories pop out in different genres? You better
believe this little gem is going to appear in my writing sometime in
the near future in at least one short story and woven into a novel.
A Beautiful Web of Poison Extends A New Strand
June 21, 2011 12:51
pm I just got back yesterday from the annual meeting of the Society
for the Study of Evolution. It took place in a big hotel on the
outskirts of Norman, Oklahoma, during a windy heat wave that felt
like the Hair Dryer of the Gods. It had been a few years since I had
last been to an SSE meeting, and I was struck by how genomic
everything has gotten. No matter how obscure the species scientists
are studying, they seem to have outrageous heaps of DNA sequence to
analyze. A few years ago, they would have been content with a few
scraps. Fortunately, SSE hasn’t turned its back on good old natural
history. There were lots of fascinating discoveries on offer, about
species that I had assumed had been studied to death. My favorite was
a talk about the rough-skinned newt, the most ridiculously poisonous
animal in America.
The scientific tale of the rough-skinned
newt begins five decades ago, with a story about three dead hunters
in Oregon. Reportedly, the bodies of the hunters were discovered
around a camp fire. They showed no signs of injury, and nothing had
been stolen. The only strange thing about the scene was the coffee
pot. Curled up inside was a newt.
In the 1960s, a biologist named Butch
Brodie got curious about the story. The newt in the coffee pot–known
as the rough-skinned newt–has a dull brown back, but when it is
disturbed, it bends its head backward like a contortionist to reveal
an orange belly as bright as candy corn. Bright colors are common
among poisonous animals. It’s a signal that says, in effect, “If
you know what’s good for you, you’ll leave me alone.” Brodie
wondered if the newts were toxic, too.
Toxic, it turns out, doesn’t
do the newts justice. They are little death machines. The newts
produce a chemical in their skin called tetrodotoxin, or TTX for
short, that’s made by other poisonous animals like pufferfish.
Locking onto sodium channels on the surface of neurons, TTX blocks
signals in the nervous system, leading to a quick death. In fact, TTX
is 10,000 times deadlier than cyanide. While we may never know for
sure what killed those three Oregon hunters, we do know that a single
rough-skinned newt could have easily produced enough TTX to kill
them, and have plenty of poison left over to kill dozens more.
Now, if the whole idea of evolution
makes you uneasy, you might react by saying, “That couldn’t
possibly have evolved.” Experience has shown that this is
not a wise thing to say. Brodie said something different: the most
plausible explanation for a ridiculously poisonous animal is that it
is locked in a coevolutionary arms race with a ridiculously
well-defended predator. Another biologist mentioned to him that he’d
seen garter snakes dining on rough-skinned newts, and so Brodie
investigated. He discovered that garter snakes in rough-skinned newt
territory have evolved peculiar shape to the receptors on their
neurons that TTX would normally grab.
The co-evolution of newts and snakes
became a family business. Brodie’s son, Edmund, grew up catching
newts, and today he’s a biologist at the University of Virginia.
Father and son and colleagues have discovered that snakes have
independently evolved the same mutations to their receptors in some
populations, while evolving other mutations with the same effect in
other populations. They’ve also found that both newts and snakes
pay a cost for their weaponry. The newts put in a lot of energy into
making TTX that could be directed to growing and making baby newts.
The evolved receptors in garter snakes don’t just protect them from
TTX; they also leave the snakes slower than vulnerable snakes.
They’ve studied newts and snakes up and down the west coast of
North America and found a huge range of TTX potency and resistance.
That’s what you’d expect from a coevolutionary process in which
local populations are adapting to each other in different
environments, with different costs and benefits to escalating the
fight.
This story is so irresistible that I’ve
written about it twice: first, ten years ago in Evolution:
The Triumph of an Idea,, and then in updated form last year
in The
Tangled Bank. I figured that the Brodies et. al. had pretty
much discovered all there was to know about these creatures. But in
Oklahoma, I discovered that they had missed what is arguably the
coolest part of the whole story.
Think about it: you’re a female newt,
you’ve fended off attackers with a staggering amounts of poison in
your skin, and now you want to pass on your genes to your
descendants. You lay a heap of eggs in a pond, and what happens? A
bunch of pond creatures come rushing in and have a feast of amphibian
caviar.
What could you possibly do to ensure at
least some of your offspring survived? Well, you have an awful lot of
TTX in your system. You have enough of the stuff to give your eggs a
parting gift to help them out there in the cruel, predator-infested
world. Make your eggs poisonous.
That is exactly what female newts do. In
fact, they load their eggs with TTX. To figure out if this poison
provided a defense against predators, the Brodies and their students
traveled to a group of ponds in central Oregon that are home to
thousands of rough-skinned newts apiece. They collected dragonflies
and other aquatic predators from the ponds and put them in buckets
filled with newt eggs, along with muck from the pond bottoms. The
scientists found that almost none of the predators would touch the
newt eggs. Since these predators eat plenty of eggs of other species,
this result shows that TTX does indeed help the newt eggs survive.
But there was one exception. Caddisfly
larvae turned out to relish the newt eggs. In fact, the caddisflies
actually grew bigger if they were supplied with newt eggs and pond
muck than with pond muck alone. And yet the Brodies and their
students estimate that there’s enough TTX in one newt egg to kill
somewhere between 500 and 3700 caddisflies.
You know where this is going. At the
evolution meeting, one of their students, Brian Gall, described
feeding newt skin to caddisflies both from the central Oregon ponds
and from ponds elsewhere without newts. The newt-free caddisflies
would happily munch on newt skin from which all the TTX was removed.
But if there was more than a trace TTX in the skin, they refused to
eat. The caddisflies that fed on newt eggs, on the other hand, would
eat the most toxic skin Gall could provide.
It appears that the caddisflies have
evolved much like the garter snakes. In ponds where rough-skinned
newts lived, the caddisflies have evolved defenses against TTX. In
fact, Gall reported, the caddisflies appear to put the snakes to
shame. Evolved snakes are 34 times more resistant to TTX than
vulnerable ones. The caddisflies have increased their resistance 175
times.
It’s not clear whether the caddisflies
and the newts are truly co-evolving, however. The Brodies will have
to find out whether adding extra TTX to eggs increases their survival
in the presence of caddisflies. Another intriguing possibility arises
from their discovery that the caddisflies actually harbor some of the
TTX they eat in their tissues for weeks after eating the eggs.
Perhaps the caddisflies are stealing the poison to protect
themselves, as happens in monarch butterflies eating toxic milkweed.
In other words, this wonderfully deadly
story isn’t over yet.
[For more information, see this new
paper in Can. J. Zool., and Understanding
Evolution, an educational web site. Ed Brodie tells much of the
story pre-caddisfly in a chapter of the new book, In
The Light of Evolution (full disclosure: I wrote a chapter
in it, too, which you can read as a pdf here)]
Have
a tremendously productive new year and Happy Writing.
--Sean
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